
" I am angry" I started my conversation with her.
Ignoringly she said "why?"
"Not a msg for a month, this is no joke, listen to me idiot I'm serious.."irritated me said to her.
"I'm serious too" she said.
I wondered why?
Turning her head towards me she questioned " Is this the attitude towards the loved? Is this what all a love is meant to you?"
"not my fau.." interrupting me she said "may be yours.."
"I have no patience yet i maintained my patience in this issue" I said sorrowfully with a hint of irritation again.
she replied"think if u really understand a girl..think how much u have hurt ur love..think how much pain u caused.."
Couldn't control myself I screamed " i know the pain i'm going through".
Dropping her franky down,feeling uneasy she looked around, everyone noticed us..i guess she decided not to talk to me anymore..
I apologized for minutes.
Controlling her anger Anusha said " not a word you speak ,it is tough to say to someone so arrogant and matured like you.. so just listen.You are good and sweet..but idiot, this is not enough to be forever with your most loved..you always said you got the best partner, the best you have ever met, making me proud & jealous of your love for bhanu..trust me you still make the best pair..go to her.. no matter what, don't leave her.."
she stopped for reply..
But not a word come for me..I tried to speak..tried to justify myself..But how hard i tried , it didn't matter..i couldn't justify..she brainwashed me..she turned my anger to guilty..may be this is why she is my best friend..
A tear rolled down while i picked my phone to ring my love..
A long rather unended conversation apologizing each other went on..
All thanks to you friend..
good start ra! good idea! experience?
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ReplyDeletebane rasinav ra.. personal experience anukunta...?!
ReplyDeleteu presented the relationship very well.. esp coz they of the opposite genders.. generally most ppl assume or believe that a guy and gal cant be "just frnds "...!!
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wonderful!
Asalu more than anything else....it's the idea ra...
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ReplyDeleteGood Dude.....
ReplyDeleteNarration is awasome and no 1 could understand with the the first few lines that u were talking 2 ur frnd....
Good. Keep Going......