
lub dub......lub dub.....lub dub....lub dub...lub dub..lub dub.lubdublubdublubdublubdub................................................................It's getting heavier and heavier.
Oops! Let me introduce myself..this is chinna.I was a 10year old boy when this happened to me.First ever thrilling experience of my life.I just thought of sharing it with you guys.Let me tell you, you miss something if such things do not happen in lyf.Without wasting anymore time, here i'm switching to what happened.
That day...
Determined very hard..finally i managed to wake up at 5 in the morning.I grabbed my brush..started brushing tardily.
"Blast! a sudden blast in my heart"
Hardly 7 meters away I see 6eyes staring at me.."Thieves" I realized.
"I shall hit them down" I thought for a moment.They stepped forward.God! they are muscular...really muscular.Now i cannot even think of touching them.
"Don't wake mom.She will be scared.i'll handle this" I thought.
My mind started scanning if it can find any solution..5minutes passed..Result: No Solution found.We four remained unmoved,staring at each other.
No option I should shout I decided..
"Shout" i thought..But I couldn't shout..my tongue isn't obeying my mind..may be coz for some reason it is angry with him or still asleep rather it is afraid too as me..
"lub dub......lub dub.....lub dub....lub dub...lub dub..lub dub.lubdublubdublubdublubdub........Heartbeat..it is getting heavier and heavier, louder and louder. May be loud enough to be audible to other three in the room too.." i felt.
Time passed..Slowly I moved my hand and grabbed a wicket.Holding tight I raised it as if i'm gonna hit them.With the wicket i signaled them to run away.They neither moved nor I found them afraid of my act..I wondered "why are they standing still..why don't they beat me if they are not afraid..why don't they run away if they are afraid..why standing still!?"
"What now?" i questioned my mind.."Pray to all gods you know, they will help" it replied.I did it. I prayed to all gods i know, nothing helped..I could hardly notice 2 things happening..My heart beating at rapid pace and Time passing..already 20plus minutes passed..
"Shout..Shoutloudly..Scream" i started saying myself..Finally I was about to scream "Thie..."
My mom woke up, entered the room and saw us.Moving quickly "They are running..catch them" she shouted.In a moment they really ran away..
I'm still in shock..shock that my mom was not scared.She saved me, I would have died with fear.
"Its okay..Its over they are no more here"she said to me.
Yes, it's over..Finally it's allover..
rey niku intha cnu unda naku telidu.......ra.nijam stry na leka jst imagination aaa? bt keka undi ra
ReplyDeletehe..he.. thanks buddy..
ReplyDeleteafter reading your story, it took 15min for my heart to return to its normal pulse rate...
ReplyDeletegot a feeling as if m watching a horror movie..
lol!!this one is good..!!
ReplyDeletehorror film entra uppi........
ReplyDeletebdw super idea ra guru.
interesting
entra anni vargala prekshakulaki cheruvavvalana all types of posts rastunnav?
ReplyDeletenice one ra!
cool ra!!!
ReplyDeleteincredible discription budy..tat does need gud cmd on language...keep it up dude
ReplyDeletenice re. this is like a natural thriller that every one can feel easily like c.bhagats stories.damn good.little more home work needed to create a extension for a story like this kind
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